Assignment 2 | Feedback

Feedback

I got very useful feedback for my prototype:

• If it’s the victim’s phone, more things like the notes app can be added.

• More content will fill out the world better.

• Expanding interactions

• Able to click and engage with all buttons

• Targeted ads

• Reddit post

• Too explicit if viewers are to construct narrative

• Not too explicit if viewers are not supposed to imprint their own narrative.

• Add more red herrings, like the breakup plotline.

• Company

• Able to see profile

• More shady spooky things

• More of a hush conspiracy

• Who is the viewer? Define their relationship with the victim, either immediately or through the narrative.

• It can be the viewer’s phone instead

• Victim’s phone makes it too easy

• Too many loopholes

• Too much information

• Landing page can be a phone home screen with a bunch of apps.

References

• SIMULACRA, an interactive horror game